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good weather for fishing

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July 18, 2006
good weather for fishing by *WhoKilledKirov is a striking poem that exhibits great use of language and demonstrates how a good poem can dim the lights and shut out the sounds of daily life. It establishes a mood and catches the reader up in its current, flowing slowly past deep water and banks hidden by bushes, leaving more to discover for the adventurous second reader – for others who would rather just enjoy the sights and sounds of a fishing trip, the weather is gorgeous. Oh, and don’t worry, when you’re done, time speeds back up to normal.
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He thinks it is good weather for fishing.
The second woman
with old hair and powder made from crushed seashells
sips swamp water from the mouth of the man with a flat Crow nose
                 and he culls her hair with hands, not his alone,
                 turning her neck into a cornstalk leaning,
                 whispering “Bia, Bia”.

He tells the other one, in stockings rolled to her ankles,
that the Whip-poor-will was out last night halving babies
from moonstones, into the dirt they come from.
                 And yes, he saw the fox swallowing
                 up the road with scatterpaws,
                 a fishing rod tucked behind his terracotta fur.
A tick to tell time by; that water must be teaming.

The second woman hangs her body in the air
long enough to say “I never trust a man whose mama
didn’t teach him the piano.”  

And what kind of fool, with the pockmark face,
lopes in a room beneath the kitchen floor
building trains no man can sit in,
building engines to run on light bulbs.
His fingers, like sewing needles, thread clay mountains
with floss grass and black glass beads meant for coal.  
               He’ll collect himself a world with his mouth as the sun
               and pin bait minnows to streams of blue paint.
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and we were always by the water
- when the water was just a
sad girl on a wet day.
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